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Year 2/3 Persuasive Writing

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Year 2/3 Persuasive Writing


Chapter One: The Attack
I ran as fast as I could as I made a skid-stop at the end of the cliff.
“Should I, should I not?” I asked myself.
I was running from a beast that had curly horns, large claws and 6 legs. The orb I was holding started to glow a pale, turquoise green colour. It flew out of my hands. The colour travelled from the side of it. It transformed into a bubble that surrounded me. I jumped off the edge of the cliff but when I hit the grasslands I didn’t feel a thing. The beast leaped onto me. The bubble faded.
“That hurt,” I exclaimed as I reached out for the orb. The monster jumped off of me. I started to make my way home. I tucked the orb into my bag. As I made my way home I logged onto the computer.

This is the ultimate weapon. The guardian is called SARPHLIX. It is said that this can transform into whatever you think of.

“Strange” I Said.

Chapter Two: The Find

         I charged out the back of the house. I thought of a missile launcher. It appeared. I thought of a sword. It appeared. I dashed off to the forest. I found out where the monster was.

“Game on!” I screeched. I charged at the sarphlix. It came out of another puddle. “So that’s how you want to play. My suggestion is that I kill you.”

I went to the puddle that was on the left of the monster. It appeared at that puddle. I stabbed at its heart. It survived!

I entered a corner. I was trapped!

Chapter Three: Elemental

I had to think fast. I thought of a shield. It appeared. I held it in front of me. The beast hit the shield. I thought of a sword. It appeared. I stabbed at its armpits. It died.

“That is a punishment,” I sighed.

I made my way back home, again.


Written by Jimmy Cameron



Some Silly Stories from Prep /1 /2

One day there was a chook. The chook read a book. The book bit the chook and the chook grabbed a hook and whacked the book. “What a naughty book you are,” said the chook.

By Jessie Hearl



Once there was a King. He swung and swung on the swing and then he fell off. He stepped on a bee and he said “It stings!” But then the bee did start to sing. The King looked up at the bee’s wings. It had colourful wings. The King said to the bee “Can you stop singing?”
                                                                                                                               By Jessica Rixon


One day two girls named Amy and Holly were pretending to be monkeys. They liked eating bees and fleas. One day they met Jessie the bee and she gave them TNT and it blew up a tree. They found a key in the blown up tree. They had tea and went in the sea .

By Bella Archer



Once upon a time there was a dark brown taco. He was the ugliest brown taco ever. His name was MARK. He went to the ocean and near the park he met a shark. Image result for clipart taco
The shark said “ Bark!! EHHHHHHHHUM!!! Sorry I barked I’m part dog. It is getting dark, do you want to crash at my place?”
“Yes I will.” said the taco.
“THANKS! I haven’t had any visitors lately.”
When they got to the shark’s house, the shark ate the taco. That was the end of the taco!


By Mark Hederman

My Favourite Place at School

riannaAt school on Monday Miss Murray took photos of my class at their favourite places in

the school.

My favourite place in the school was the flying fox playground. In my photo I am

upside down on the red bars. My face is turning red like my dress. In the background I

can see trees, a blue pole and nice grass. I can see heaps of colours: pink, green, blue,

white and red. We did it in Literacy on Monday and I liked it.

By Rianna Tatti

Here is a photo of me in a tunnel on a playground. The tunnel is red, so are my pants. I’m happy because it is my

favourite place. I am in a red and white dress. My shoes are pink. I am at school. The tunnel is round and I look like

an egg. The sky is white.                                                                                                                                            By Jessie Hearljessie

I am at the basketball court and I threw around a ball. There are some trees diagonal to me, and grass under the tree.

The tree is big but it looks small in the photo. The ball is small. I am medium size and I can see red, black, green,

yellow, blue, white and grey colours. I felt happy because I got a goal and I was playing. I jumped up and threw the

ball all the way through the hoop. The sky and the tables where in front of me. When I threw the ball I said “arrr and

ehh.”          By Mark Hederman mark

My favourite place in the school is on the gymnastics bars. I like the bars because I like gymnastics. I am happy in

this photo. I am upside down .I am in my school dress. I am smiling because I am happy. Behind me is grass and

underneath me is wood chips. My hair is waving from side to side.
rianna                                                                                                                       Bella Archer