Monthly Archives: August 2015

The Great Big Treehouse

After school on Friday Mark, Billy, Narnie and I are making a treehouse out the front yard. Mark is my best friend from school. I can trust him to keep all of my secrets. Mark makes me laugh because he forgets when his birthday is.

Imagine if he wakes up in the morning and asks, ” What are all of these presents for?”

Billy is my naughty little dog. He has hairy, fawn fur. He is naughty because he bites all the time. Mum thinks he should be named Chad because he’s naughty all the time. I agree with her.

By Chad Sinclair

The Abominable Snowman, Number 2

When the man came running back to the village he was covered in poo! He screamed out to everyone in the village, ” The Abominable Snowman is REAL!!!”

The man told everyone to kill the Abominable Snowman. Everyone went to find the Abominable Snowman.

Everyone heard a roar! The man shouted, ” The Abominable Snowman is here!”

The man got squashed by the Abominable Snowman’s foot.

Everyone got eaten. The Abominable Snowman had a big belly ache but he was happy.

By Jacob Richards

Jessica’s Story

Yesterday  afternoon I came home and my cat was gone because my dad let Stripe outside and my dad was worried about my cat. My mum was also worried about our cat and my dog was worried about my cat.

Then she came in when it was my bedtime and she was eating her food. Then I went to bed with my cat.

                          By Jessica Rixon

Stories From Preps And Grade One

Today was my sharing and I brought my kitten to school. Everybody liked her. Her name is Sky.

TiarnahSinclair

I’m going to Katy Perry’s concert to watch her.

               Bella Archer

I drew a picture. I drew a queen and a king. The queen saw a butterfly.

Jessie Hearl

Today I woke up early and had breakfast, so Mum could do my hair.

Holly Schaefer

My spider has eight legs. They are blue. My spider has eight eyes. They are purple eyes. My spider lives in the ground. It spins a tunnel web. My spider is cute and funny.

Rianna Tatti

On Saturday I went motorbike riding. I did a little jump. I had a little crash. I crashed the wheel. When I was riding I went faster. I wanted to do the jump.

Mark Hederman

Improving our Sentences

In this lesson we had to make better, more interesting, sentences by adding different adjectives to describe the nouns.

Our New Sentences

The two very fat, sneaky cats with long, soft fur were sneaking into a shop and stealing all the money.

Natalie Rixon

The two very fluffy and bony labs with floppy ears were in the flower bed destroying the priceless flowers and the baby trees.

Sophie Knight

The  park  was very peaceful until the three dogs came, noisy, barking and jumping around.

Kaylee Cameron

The three hardly non-fluffy, ginger cats licked themselves in the house by the fire.

Alex Knight

The two very vicious, bulky bobcats with sharp and point teeth chased their prey into the dark, smelly swamp.

Dustin Bommer

The two mostly strong, hard-working men with lots of shovels and spades were working at the mill.

Elliott Thomas

The two very petite blue heeler dogs with short tails chased each other at the park.

Jimmy Cameron

The very soft bullshark went on a rampage.

Dylan Millard

The two enormous faded orange, dangerous tiger sharks with sharp teeth swam in the ocean.

Sara Tatti